No paper is ever perfect, and could be re wrote 100 times before the author feels its right. However this will be my hardest obstacle i will face in this class. As my grade shows my paper needs work, however it is very challenging for me to find more to say when i already wrote something once. Yes you can correct the basic grammatical errors, but i run into trouble adding more depth to my paper once i get around to the second or third revision.
As i said in an earlier blog i tend to have trouble using more interesting words or words that communicate my ideas clearly. This was an area i lost quite a few points for on my paper. So for my next time around i will try and find as many words that seem dull or even confusing and then select a more unique word choice in my next revision.
For my next revision i also need to find a logical order and follow it. However i sort of had trouble with this issue, while writing this paper because it didn't seem to need to follow any order. However I'm sure there is some rearranging that could be done to make this analysis flow better. Also i need to establish a clear audience and refrain from using the word "you". That is a word i cant seem to erase from my vocabulary. So for these next rewrites its all about clarity and establishing a main argument.
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