blog 6

The critical analysis was a bit challenging for me to write. This was definitely a new assignment for me and took quiet a bit of thought. Although I'm sure that is always the goal of the teacher, but most of my assignments have just been to summarize a movie or a book. For this project i actually had to form an argument and look deeper into the picture. I thought the movie was a very good and interesting movie to use for this assignment because it did pose many arguments. However it was very hard to try and make a clear argument for this movie. It was very clear that the movie was trying to prove the point of maturity and when do we ever really grow up, but proving that point was very hard. When do we really grow up? You cant put an age or a time on when a persons grows up. You probably cant even put an exact event that happens that makes a person grow up. although this movie gave many examples of situations that helped theses boys grow up. I was fairly satisfied with my grade on that paper. however i am still a bit confused on how to add other sources into my paper. I know i still need to add outside sources and a works cited page. I also need to work on fixing some of my small grammatical errors. I also seemed to confuse a few of the characters and put the wrong names, even though i was positive i had it right. I feel like i have the basic idea for this paper, i just need to add some minor detail to add some spice to this paper.